Final answer:
The verb tense in sentence 2 should be changed from 'many cried' to 'many were crying' to correct the inconsistency and match the ongoing past action.
Step-by-step explanation:
The verb tense error in sentence 2 can be corrected by changing 'many cried' to 'many were crying' to maintain consistency in verb tense with the past continuous 'ships were passing' used to describe ongoing action at that time. The complete corrected sentence would then read: 'Most immigrants coming from central, eastern, and southern Europe, and as their ships were passing the Statue of Liberty, many were crying in anticipation as they reached their dream.'