(1) These early people believed that life came from chocolate. (2) This may explain why chocolate is found in some graves. (3) Today, chocolate is not that big a deal, and everyone gets to enjoy it. (4)

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(1) These early people believed that life came from chocolate. (2) This may explain why chocolate is found in some graves. (3) Today, chocolate is not that big a deal, and everyone gets to enjoy it. (4) But history shows how holy it once was.

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