Question

Correct and/or rewrite any grammar or clarity errors in the following student

sentences. Please print this sheet to have it available for class on Monday.
1. I enjoy going out to parties. Places with beautiful people looking for fun.
2. I've gone through many changes in my life. But none of these changes
marked me like the one I'll tell you about because this one changed the
course of my life forever. (thesis statement)
3. My income was sufficient to maintain my family and my needs.
4. My mom won the lottery in Cuba, we could come to the U.S.
5. Coming to the U.S. was a big change in my life because I had to live in a new
country, meet new friends and a new language.
6. In my country I had a lot of family. Family that I had to leave behind.
7. Friendship is something everyone needs because is our company throughout
life.

Answer 1

1. comma in between parties and places lowercase p for places

Step-by-step explanation: