Question

Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique

should revise the paraphrase?
Henrique needs to change the sequence of events
to be in a logical order.
• Henrique needs to add
some descriptive language
to make the story come alive.
• Henrique needs to add some dialogue
to make the
point of view consistent.
Henrique needs to change the point of view to make
the sequence clearer.

Answer 1

Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should revise the paraphrase? Henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be in a logical order. Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive.