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Can someone pls revise and edit the mistakes I made in the paragraph?

Lastly, the jellyfish population should most definitely be controlled. They are animals and a part of nature and should not be eliminated completely, but scientists should find a way to deal with their population. We would also have to act now, before it is too late and too big to control!

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Lastly, the jellyfish population should most definitely be controlled. They are animals, and a part of nature and should not be eliminated completely, but scientists should find a way to deal with their population. We would also have to act now, before it is too late and too big to control!

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Not really any mistakes. you can put it through grammarly and they correct punctuation, spelling and grade your work. this seems pretty good though!

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