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Read the sentence.

Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, the diet went out the window.

Which revision most effectively corrects the dangling modifier in the sentence?


Tempted, the delicious-looking chocolate made the diet go out the window.

Going out the window, the diet was tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate.

Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, I let my diet go out the window.

Letting the diet go out the window tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate.

User For Guru
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Answer:

Tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate, I let my diet go out the window.

Step-by-step explanation:

User Kyaw Siesein
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Answer:

C

Step-by-step explanation:

The one who was tempted by the delicious-looking chocolate was neither the window, nor the window or the chocolate itself, it was me.

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