Question

In order to create a mood of suspense, which parts of speech in this passage

are most in need of improvement?
A group of people strode up to the door. One of the people
banged on the door and said, "Open up or we'll force our
way in!" I backed off from the door and grabbed a self-
defense device from the closet.

A. The verbs

B. The nouns

c. The adjectives

D. The adverbs

Answer 1

The answer is c. The adjectives

Answer 2

C. Adjectives

Step-by-step explanation:

Adjectives are the descriptive parts of speech, so by adding these into your sentences and phrases, you can add a lot more context and detail, making your piece of writing, more interesting to the audience. This text lacks a wanted and needed ammount of information and detail.