9.5k views
0 votes
What do you think?yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet

What do you think?yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet-example-1

1 Answer

4 votes

Answer:

Love it!

Step-by-step explanation:

Includes subtle biblical references within your poem.

Concise yet deep.

The only inconsistent part is the first stanza - it is the only section with any variation of "you" in it, which is totally fine but it stands out a little.

Other than that, I think it's great :)

User Medea
by
8.0k points

Related questions

asked Mar 8, 2022 13.6k views
Shwetabh Shekhar asked Mar 8, 2022
by Shwetabh Shekhar
8.1k points
1 answer
2 votes
13.6k views
asked Feb 2, 2023 217k views
Pavelety asked Feb 2, 2023
by Pavelety
8.8k points
1 answer
20 votes
217k views