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If your working thesis is "Volunteering with community centers provides no benefit to young adults," but your research shows that, in fact, there are many benefits to youth volunteerism, how could the thesis statement be revised to reflect the research? Volunteering is not important. Young adults should volunteer at community centers for a number of reasons. Volunteering at community centers provides a number of benefits to young adults, the most important of which is increased self-esteem. Young adults should volunteer at community centers

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Answer:

Young adults should volunteer at community centers for a number of reasons.

Step-by-step explanation:

The research says nothing about self-esteem and none of the other answers would make sense.

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