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Okay, just click on this and tell me which sentence sounds the best to you. It's easy. Thus, easy points. Or you can even make you own, having the same meaning. Right now, I'm working a group presentation that explains what Wattpad is (and doing 98% of the work. No, I am genuinely serious. I did the math in my head).

CHOOSE 1 OF THEM, PICK WISELY:

The objective of Wattpad is to overcome traditional obstacles between authors & readers to build engaging cultural groups with a mutual love for literature, shared knowledge, and values around stories.

The objective of Wattpad is to overcome traditional obstacles between authors & readers, bringing them together to be a large community with a shared love for literature and values around stories.

The objective of Wattpad is to overcome traditional obstacles between authors & readers, bringing them together to be a large community around stories.

The objective of Wattpad is to overcome traditional obstacles between authors & readers to build an engaging community with a mutual love for literature and values around stories.

The objective of Wattpad is to overcome traditional obstacles between authors & readers to build an engaging community with a shared love of stories and literature.

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The objective of Wattpad is to overcome traditional obstacles between authors & readers, bringing them together to be a large community with a shared love for literature and values around stories.

my reasoning is that this particular sentence sums up all of the sentences in a more organized formation, and it doesn't take away the main point of the sentence, the others kinda do.

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I think the 2nd one is good
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