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Write a sensible heart touching paragraph (sad)

For example: "As the rain dropped from the sky, thunder crackled, I could feel my heart crackling like the thunder roaring in the night sky. As the rain drippled from my tips of my hair, and to my cheeks it slid and I began to cry. Flashbacks of memories zap through my mind and I begin to remeber sadly."

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I'm running, I don't know where to, I just need to get out. Get out of my head. "But how can I escape myself." I say outloud more as a statement than a question. I need to get away from myself. Cut off everything. Before I could finish thinking, I am interrupted from the slippery wet floor. I slip and scrape my arm. This arm. This stupid arm. This arm that brought the end of Maya. That took Jason's sight and Maya's life. This stupid body. This body that is now mine, but once was my sister's.

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Sitting in the rain, I could feel my mood shifting, and heart breaking. My mood translated on the grey sky. You could never tell I was crying because the rain began to pour and disguise my sobs. Memories ran around in my head like a toy train as i remembers what the past has done to me

vvv sad rip :'c

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