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Is this good for romeo and juliet capulet invite?

The Masquerade Ball
From the Capulet residence of Verona
Wear your maks
This night I hold a feast
7 pm will be
Beware, no Montagues
Grab a glass
Dance the night away

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Answer:

Maybe move "Grab a glass" to the 6th line. Also instead of "the" put "thy" for more of a renaissance feel.

I hope this helps!

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