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Can someone please help with grammar and make it sound professional please!

Can someone please help with grammar and make it sound professional please!-example-1
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I, personally, thought they would look more like Johnny Depp, but instead they looked more like Sid, from Ice Age. Then, the leader of the group tried to communicate with me, but I only understood English.

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Hope this helps. Just as a suggestion, try to separate your sentences when they change topic so they don’t turn into run-ons.

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