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21 votes
21 votes
My poem :)

Your life is part of me ,

and i thank you for that

Cause without you i wouldn't be who

i am right now , I am who i am

and the love you have showed me gave

me convinced to follow my dreams ,

please rate this poem

User Tomision
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7 votes
7 votes

Answer: I would rate this a 7/10 mostly because of the grammatical errors but overall it has a very deep meaning and it is a well written poem.

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User Bradoaks
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21 votes
21 votes

Answer:

This is pretty good!

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But if you have a question I’d like to help you.

User Ryanwebjackson
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