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Can someone help me with grammar? Or help make it better?

Can someone help me with grammar? Or help make it better?-example-1
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If my car was an alien spaceship maybe the Aliens would see mee as one of them.

When we flew through the town of Rosswell we saw a lot of awesome alien shops like an alien clothing shop, lava lamp shop, a hoverboard shop and an alien burger king. I felt right at home there.

We decided to camp out there and it was absolutely beautiful! There were millions of stars and sometimes meteors. I was so exited because you never know if aliens actually exist and might share their alien ways with us human beings.

I changed the text to make it a little bit more interesting. Feel free to change it.

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