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As you revise, what kinds of sentences should you expand or elaborate on?

sentences that include some unnecessary words
sentences that introduce a paragraph’s main ideas
sentences that are longer and more complex
sentences that seem to lack important details

User BudBrot
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Ones that lack important details
User Oliver Keyes
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When you revise, focus on expanding/elaborating on sentences that lack important details

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