31.0k views
21 votes
My Poem What do you think

War is so bitter to the core
and how much Gore can you from all this war
and it's all over a few people bickering
How sickening...
If we keep this up will be the ones flickering
they think they say things are going to change
And yet people to defy the treaties
all because some people get greed
Then we become the targets in a targeting range
and it starts to feel way to Rippialing

User AJFarkas
by
4.5k points

1 Answer

3 votes
that’s a nice poem keep it up hope this motivates you to keep writing
User Chinchan Zu
by
4.8k points