Question

Does this make sense?

Answer 1

Just another thing to note. You’re and your. You used your but it isn’t the correct one. Your mean yours like belonging to someone. You’re is you are. So when you say “for example your wondering” ect, that would be grammatically incorrect. So just a reminder use you’re instead of your because you’re trying to say you are.

Sorry if this is confusing but hope you understand it.

Answer 2

Step-by-step explanation:

If you made it "We love suspense because it creates excitement. For example, while watching a horror movie, you are always wondering when the killer will strike. This is an example of how suspense keeps you interested waiting for a surprise or event to happen." it might be a little better. Good work, just a few tweaks to make it the best it can be. :D