Question

To some of you - my essay may seem good even brilliant

F. NO CHANGE
G. To some of you my essay—may seem good even brilliant.
H. To some of you, my essay may seem—good even brilliant.
J. To some of you, my essay may seem good—even brilliant.

Answer 1

Answer: J. To some of you, my essay seem good—even brilliant.

-Always capitalize the first letter of a sentence.
-For commas, just put them where it makes the most sense. Commas are basically short pauses.
-Separate pronouns such as you and my.

Answer 2

F no change

Step-by-step explanation:

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