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Independent Practice

Read the sentence.
On vacation, we went swimming, diving, and for a canoe ride.
Which revision corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?
A. On vacation, we went swimming, for a dive, and for a canoe ride.
B. On vacation, we went swimming, diving, and canoeing.
C. On vacation, we went swimming, diving, and we took a canoe ride.
D. On vacation, we went for a swim, for a dive, and canoeing.

User Alkindus
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Hi !!

To correct the parallelism in the sentence , you've yo use the same verbal sentences

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B- On vacation, we went swimming, diving, and canoeing.

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There only are gerund phrases.

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User Adam Lukaszczyk
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