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I visited numerous doctors, but they couldn’t pinpoint what the issue is so my parents and I traveled to (some random country ignore this part )to consult doctors there.

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I frequented numerous specialist, but the issue is so severe and medically unknown, even the best doctors could not pinpoint what sort of illness had forced its way through my body; constantly I was in excruciating pain to the point where my parents had enough, and booked plane tickets to ___, and we made appointments to consult with every high grade doctor in the area.

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