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Is this a good way to start my Health paper somebody lmk

Is this a good way to start my Health paper somebody lmk-example-1

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That is good- but is that your introduction paragraph? Because intros are usually a little bit longer, unless your teacher told you so :)
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Answer:

I think its fine

Step-by-step explanation:

You started by telling the audience what Health is

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