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What is the best way to revise this sentence?

Sarah saw a bee floating in the pool trying to dry its wings.
Sarah saw a bee trying to dry its wings floating in the pool.
Drying its wings in the pool, Sarah saw a floating bee.
The sentence is correct as written.

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The sentence is correct is “ as written “
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Answer:

The sentence is correct as written.

Step-by-step explanation:

You didn't include the original sentence but, all of the answer choices are incorrect.

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