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Which of the following should not be included in the introductory paragraph of an essay?

A. A thesis statement
B. Background on the topic
C. Evidence and analysis
D. An attention-getting device

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It’s A thesis statement
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The correct answer is C. Evidence and analysis

Step-by-step explanation:

The introductory paragraph of an essay is the one that presents basic elements of the essay that are developed in the body paragraphs. Because of this, introductory paragraphs commonly include first a hook or attention-getting device that invites the reader to read all the essay, then an introduction of the topic that includes information to the background related to it and finally, the thesis statement that explains the idea that is going to be explained during the essay. However, in the introductory paragraph, you should not include evidence and analysis as these are included in the body paragraphs to explain the thesis statement but not in the introductory paragraph as this only presents the topic and thesis but does not support it or analyze it.

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