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Me gustaría escribir una crítica positiva, pero no lo puedo hacer. Me habría gustado que los personajes de la novela (1)fueran más interesantes. Me habría encantado que la novela (2)fuese de otra manera. Los personajes estaban deprimidos al principio, y creo que habría sido mejor si (3)tuvieran la oportunidad de ser felices al final. Ése no fue el único problema que encontré. Mientras leía el manuscrito, encontré algunos errores graves. Para mí, era difícil de creer que la casa editorial (4)publicara el libro así. No podía creer que los editores (5)no leyeran el manuscrito antes de publicarlo. Ya veremos si el libro tiene éxito.
Translation
I would like to write a positive review, but I can not do it. I would have liked the characters in the novel were more interesting. I would have loved that the novel was different. The characters were depressed at first, and I think it would have been better if they had the chance to be happy in the end. That was not the only problem I found. While reading the manuscript, I found some serious errors. To me, it was hard to believe that the publishing house published the book in this way. I could not believe that the editors did not read the manuscript before publishing it. We'll see if the book is successful.
