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Read the passage and then revise it to correct any pronoun shifts in person or

number.


A person has a right to their own happiness, Simon thought. When he told this
to his bosses Brenda and Nicole, though, we both laughed and told him to get
back to work.

Read the passage and then revise it to correct any pronoun shifts in person or number-example-1
User Elen
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Answer:Change we to they

Step-by-step explanation:

A P E X!

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Answer:

A person has a right to their own happiness, Simon thought. When he told this to his bosses Brenda and Nichole though, they both laughed and told him to get back to work.

Step-by-step explanation:

I hope this helps!! I checked and it’s right on

A P E X I got 5 points for this question because I have the same question, but anyway I hope this helped!! :3 have a good day

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