Question

Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English.

The horse ran fast as the other horses ran fast, too.

Answer 1

Answer: The horse ran at a brilliant pace just as the other horses did.

Step-by-step explanation:

Answer 2

The horse ran just as fast as the other horses.

There were a lot of extra words in the original. I got rid of duplicate words and the word “too.” I added the word “just” to make the sentence flow smoother.