According to the victim, there was no way that she knew the bad guy. He attacked her just inside the door to her house, right on the porch. He tore her shirt open and ripped off (delete of) her bra, exposing her breasts. She ran to the back of her house and locked her bedroom door. He pounded (delete knocked and beat, because that is just repeating again and again that he was pounding on the door) on the door, and jiggled the doorknob. He called her names, scaring her, but she didn't open the door. She was able to call 911, and the police arrived quickly ( "very much fast" is repetitive so you can condense it into one word). The two police ( "police" is irregular. It is both plural and singular so you don't have to add and s) caught ( "to catch" is irregular in the past tense) the robber inside ("of" is unnecessary so you can delete it) her house. She was able to point him out as the man who assaulted her. He got put in jail for burglary and attempted rap e.
In case you didn't catch on the bold words/punctuation are the ones I changed.
Hope this helped!