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Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English. The model was dressed nicely, in a lovely outfit, and a kind of cute scarf She looked fantastic.
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Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English.

The model was dressed nicely, in a lovely outfit, and a kind of cute scarf She looked fantastic.

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Answer: The model was dressed to perfection, in an exquisite outfit, and a beautiful scarf. She looked extravagant.

Explanation: I just replaced some of the words with more exiting adjectives.

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The model was dressed to perfection in a beautiful outfit and a stylish scarf to match and she looked captivating

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