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Rewrite the following sentences using vivid adjectives and avoiding slang and nonstandard English.

A boy and his dog sat by a house.

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A young boy and his furry German Shepard dog quietly sat by a giant,beautiful house.

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A boy and his dog-sat by a house. (This sentence is fine as-is)

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