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Please help with my grammar errors it's an essay about my loss.

On one evening night in November. I was enjoying
 my evening with my husband and four kids
 watching a movie. When i received a phone call.
  that changed my life forever.

   My brother was in a car accident and had passed
   away along with his girlfriend. It has taken me  
   years  to overcome the grief  I have felt in my
   heart.i had to stop avoiding and  isolating myself
   from  family and friend's
 (Proverbs 18:1) “I tried not to give in to the urge to
 remain socially isolated,  People visited me, and I
 welcomed them. I also poured out my feelings to
 my husband close friends.” i had so many
  questions.
 Why do bad things happen to good people?
  Is God to blame for such things? Are
 calamities random occurrences, or are they
 man-made?
 Could it be Karma, that is, the result of
 one’s actions in a past life, that causes personal
 suffering? If there is an almighty God, why does he
 not protect good people from harm? Will life ever
 be free of evil and suffering? and  If there's a true
 god then what is his name?
 Finally I decided that I wanted to study the Bible
and get to know one of Jehovah's witnesses. with
doing so  I have gained  bible Insight and
I learned many bible's principles i have
finally  learned the truth about the condition of the
dead.
 “At Ecclesiastes 9:5, the Bible shows me that the
dead are not suffering, and that fact gives me an
inner peace. The Bible also teaches me that there is
going to be a resurrection and that those who are
dead will be brought back to life. So when I think of
loved ones I have lost in death i just think of them
taking a long peaceful nap or away on a trip.”—Acts
24:15. And  when God “will swallow
up death forever.”—Isaiah 25:8.



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Answer:

Im sorry for your loss, This should be correct =)

Step-by-step explanation:

On one evening night in November. I was enjoying

my evening with my husband and four kids

watching a movie. When I received a phone call.

that changed my life forever.

My brother was in a car accident and had passed

away along with his girlfriend. It has taken me

years to overcome the grief I have felt in my

heart.i had to stop avoiding and isolating myself

from family and friend's

(Proverbs 18:1) “I tried not to give in to the urge to

remain socially isolated, People visited me, and I

welcomed them. I also poured out my feelings to

my husband close friends.” I had so many

questions.

Why do bad things happen to good people?

Is God to blame for such things? Are

calamities random occurrences, or are they

man-made?

Could it be Karma, that is, the result of

one’s actions in a past life, that causes personal

suffering? If there is an almighty God, why does he

not protect good people from harm? Will life ever

be free of evil and suffering? and If there's a true

god then what is his name?

Finally, I decided that I wanted to study the Bible

and get to know one of Jehovah's witnesses. with

doing so I have gained bible Insight and

I learned many bible's principles I have

finally learned the truth about the condition of the

dead.

“At Ecclesiastes 9:5, the Bible shows me that the

dead are not suffering, and that fact gives me inner peace. The Bible also teaches me that there is

going to be a resurrection and that those who are

dead will be brought back to life. So when I think of

loved ones I have lost in death I just think of them

taking a long peaceful nap or away on a trip.”—Acts

24:15. And when God “will swallow

up death forever.”—Isaiah 25:8

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