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Which is the best revision of the sentence?

In June I went to summer camp with dancing, singing, paint pictures, which were my favorite activities and I want to go again next year.

A) My favorite activities from summer camp that I went to in June were dancing, singing, and painting pictures. I want to go back next year!
B) Next year I want to go again to summer camp that I went to in June. My favorite activities were that I danced, sang, and painted pictures.
C) I went to summer camp in June and want to go again next year. My favorite activities were dancing, singing, and painting pictures.
D) Next year, I want to go back to the summer camp I went to in June with dancing, singing, and painting that were my favorite activities.

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The correct answer is letter C

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Answer:

C) I went to summer camp in June and want to go again next year. My favorite activities were dancing, singing, and painting pictures.

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