Question

Could anybody help me write two body paragraphs please! This is my introduction.

Thousands of people get hurt from playing sports each year. Some of these sports can be dangerous, such as football, horse riding, soccer, and so on. In soccer, you might trip and sprain a leg. In horse riding, you can fall off at any time and break a bone, your back, or worse. Playing football, a high contact sport, an accident might happen, and you could even get brain damage. I could go on and on, but there is so many to list. These can have a huge impact on you. “Stop Sport Injuries” state that over 3.5 million kids under 14, have had to receive treatment from sport injuries. From football to even hockey, people can get seriously hurt. So, teens and children should always be limited to these sports, proper safety and caution should be exercised, and at the very least be under supervision.

Answer 1

I can't help you write 2 body paragraphs, but I can give you some tips on how to revise your intro.

Step-by-step explanation:

Try not to add your evidence in your introduction. Your thesis statement is good. When ending lists, don't use "and so on." It happens a lot in writing and makes your piece sound unprofessional. You can just end the list at soccer.