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Which is an example of faulty coordination?

Running burns calories, and it helps strengthen leg muscles.

I like to stay in shape, and running helps me do that.

I ran in a marathon last year, and I finished the race.

Running takes discipline, and many people enjoy running.

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Running takes discipline, and many people enjoy running.

Step-by-step explanation:

By combining independent clauses in a sentence, the writer reveals the relationships between the thoughts expressed by the clauses.

The conjunction and in the last option is an example of faulty coordination because you can hadly expect people to enjoy something that requires discipline. Discipline and enjoyment are hardly compatible for most people.

If we replace the conjunction and with the conjunction yet, we will show the correct relationship between the thoughts expressed by the clauses:

Running takes discipline, yet many people enjoy running.

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a good one is The FitnessGramâ„¢ Pacer Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues. The 20 meter pacer test will begin in 30 seconds. Line up at the start. The running speed starts slowly, but gets faster each minute after you hear this signal

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