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Explain how you will present your narrative to your peers. Include the steps you will take as you present and presentation techniques that you plan to keep in mind as you present. Review your diary entry and revise one section to add more dialogue, description, or sensory language. Type your revision below.

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I would include dialogue between the forest ranger and Adelle's father: He asked the ranger, "Have you seen any bears?" The ranger laughed, gave me a reassuring smile as though he knew why we were asking, and replied, "No one's seen a bear in this area in over five years!" I wonder if he could see the terror in my eyes.

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