Question

I have to write a "Where I'm From" poem for school. Can someone tell me if this is good or not...

Where I’m from:
I am from loud singing crowds
I am from big family to country words
I am from saying “Yeehaw” to “Hey y’all”
I am from “Jesus saved us” to “God loves his sons and daughters”
I am from Stuffing on Thanksgiving to Turkey on Christmas
I am from “You’re ugly” to “The most heavenly father stated that you are beautiful just like everyone else”
I am from half family country to half being city.
I am from “The mockingbird” to “The raven”
I am from “He did this” to “He did that”
I am from “She said this” to “She said that”
I am from “Feeling down” to “Feeling up”
I am from back roads to city palace
I am from nana’s house to my aunt’s houses
I am from family being annoying to family being lovely.
I am from small town to big town.

Answer 1

I really like this! My only input for you would be to remove a couple "I am" statements. For example:

"I am from big family to country words/From saying 'Yeehaw' to 'Hey y'all'"

It just makes it flow better.

Fantastic work!!!