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Marley has decided that moving sentence 6 before 4 will improve the organization of her essay. Is Marley correct in her revision?

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C) yes, the revision improves the logical order of the information

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Moving the sentence does improve the paragraph because readers should know that the tree frog reveals its colors before they know that flashes of color will scare away other animals. The correct answer is yes, the revision improves the logical order of the information.

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Answer:c yes the revision improves the logical order of the information

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