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Which sentence is better?

1. Gharials have been posed the threat of being killed by fishermen, being hunted for their skins (is although no longer considered a threat), being used as trophies, and being applied in the practice of alternative medicine.

2. Gharials have been posed the threat of being killed by fishermen, being hunted for their skins, being used as trophies, and being applied in the practice of alternative medicine, although hunting is no longer considered a threat.

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I think that number one is better than number two, do you need a answer why?

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