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Which choice avoids redundancy in wording?

A) The sitting cat with long fur purred as it sat atop the bed.
B) The furry cat was sitting as it sat atop the bed.
C) The sitting, furry cat sat atop the bed.
D) The furry cat sat atop the bed.

User Chanckjh
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D it doesn’t point out that he sat on the bed twice

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D. Because all the other ones point out twice that the cat was sitting. :)
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