Question

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE EDIT THIS OR CHANGE IT SO ITS A INTRIGUING INTRODUCTION. ALSO GIVE SOME FEEDBACK, THANKYOU!!!

From the bouncy basketball courts to the slippery oval in winter a wide range of sports play a major role in many teens’ lives. It’s also when teens are keen to play and participate in sporting activities and when sport becomes more competitive as teens enjoy the thrill of winning. Likewise, it is when teens start thinking about sporting carers which could result in multiple training a week and the intensity level to sky rocket. Injuries can affect anyone and there is no single sport that is specifically to blame for the increase in sport injuries. However, sport is played to improve fitness, learn new skills and also for social purposes. Teens account for an estimated 2 million injuries and 500,000 doctor visits each year. Therefore, with the increased competition and intensity levels in today’s sport, the increase of injuries is rising immensely, and we must be aware of prevention methods. So, teens continue to be involved in sports and experience less injuries.

Answer 1

If you would like i can make it sound way more professional and flow more off the tongue. You have a lot of run on sentences. (BTW Basketball courts don't bounce and what do you mean by ovals? Hockey pucks? I'll go ahead and start rewriting it.

EDIT! Here it is!:

From shooting a basketball to scoring a goal sports play a major role in many teens’ lives. People's teenage years are also the best time to play and participate in sporting activities. Schools make sports more competitive as teens enjoy the thrill of winning. But when teens start thinking about pursuing sporting careers, certain sports would result in training sessions daily and a higher intensity level. Teens account for an estimated 2 million injuries and 500,000 doctor visits each year. Injuries can affect anyone and there is no single sport that is specifically to blame for the increase in sport-related injuries however, sports are played to improve fitness, learn new skills, and to make friends. In conclusion, with the increased competition and intensity levels in today’s sports, injuries are rising immensely. We must be aware of prevention methods so teens could continue to play the sports they love and not get injured in the process.