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Which sentence contains the best example of descriptive details?

A.The apartment shuddered under the onslaught of the howling wind.
B.They were about to move into the new apartment building last week.
C.In preparation for the move to the apartment, they had to pack first.
D.Inside the apartment, there was a lot to do to make it habitable.

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A. Because the other do not give a discription for example d says there a lot to be done but dose not say what this answer (A) explains!

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Answer:

A.The apartment shuddered under the onslaught of the howling wind.

Step-by-step explanation:

Descriptive details are those that illustrate vivid images for the reader to immerse and experience in a much profound manner what is being depicted. This is achieved through specific vocabulary, tone and sensorial descriptions that evoke mood and resonant imagery.

The remaining options are descriptive summaries of a scene or an action and use basic vocabulary; thereby, do not evoke or illustrate any powerful image or experience.

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