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What is the BEST way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning? Mona told me that I had won an award for my poem that to pick it up on Saturday.

A) Mona told me that I had won a very prestigious award for my poem.
B) My award will be ready to be picked up on Saturday. Mona told me this.
C) I won an award for my poem. Mona said I should pick it up on Saturday.
D) Mona told me that I had won an award for my poem and that I should pick it up on Saturday.

User Truong Ha
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The answer is D hope this helps!

User Kevin Qiu
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The answer to this is D