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Consider these sentences:


I have a new hobby.


I keep track of all the wild birds I spot.


Which sentence uses parenthetical elements most effectively to combine the information in the sentences?


I have a new hobby, which is keeping track of all the wild birds I spot.

I have a (new) hobby, which is keeping track—of all the (wild) birds I spot.

I have a new hobby, keeping track—of all the wild birds I spot.

I have a new hobby—keeping track—of all the (wild) birds (I spot).

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I have a new hobby which is keeping track of all the wild birds I spot.
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