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Every year my family goes to Disney World, and every year I hate it. I know I'm not like most kids who would love to go "the happiest place on earth" every year--but I hate fast rides. My family on the other hand--all five of them--love fast rides, and that's ALL they want to ride. Every year we have the same argument. Everyone wants to ride Space Mountain--but me. My favorite ride is actually the Haunted Mansion. Everyone wants to ride Mount Everest--but me. The only person who wants to ride "It's a Small World" is me. I honestly don't even know why my family takes me with them sometimes. I'd have a lot more fun (and so would they) if they just left me with Grandma at her house. Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph to give it a stronger focus? A) Everyone wants to ride Mount Everest--but me. B) Everyone wants to ride Space Mountain--but me. C) My favorite ride is actually the Haunted Mansion. D) I'd have a lot more fun (and so would they) if they just left me with Grandma at her house.

User Bwing
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D seems like the right answer. Also that kid dosen't even know.

User Ahmet Tanakol
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The correct answer is C.

Best of luck.

User Charalamm
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