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Which sentence should be revised to correct a grammatical error?

Invasive species are destroying the balance of the Everglades ecosystem.
Burmese pythons, one common invader, belongs in their own environment, not in the Everglades.
The pythons do not attack humans, but they do eat everything from songbirds to adult deer.
The endangered Florida panther competes for the same prey as the pythons and is losing out to these huge snakes.

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Answer:

Burmese pythons, one common invader, belongs in their own environment, not in the Everglades.

Step-by-step explanation:

The above sentence is not cohesive and appears to have been poorly formulated, so it should be revised and rewritten to eliminate this error in its formulation. The correct thing would be to rewrite the sentence so that it sounds similar to the following sentence:

"Burmese pythons are not natural in the Everglades, but they are the most common invasive species in the region."

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