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Read the following sentence:

Bees, flies, and junebugs filled the heavy, salty seaside air
with the droning whir of their busy wings.
Which of the following revisions removes too many important details?
A. Flies and junebugs filled the sea air with the drone of their wings.
B. Bugs filled the heavy seaside air with the whir of their wings.
C. Bees and flies filled the salty air with the sound of their busy
wings.
D. Different kinds of bugs filled the air with the sounds of their wings.

User Ezanker
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Answer:

D!!!

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User FlySoFast
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Answer: D. Different kinds of bugs filled the air with the sounds of their wings.

Step-by-step explanation:

the answer is D because the rest of the answers give almost the same amount of context as the original, but D gives the least amount of info.

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