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Rewrite this thesis statement as if it were for the conclusion. “The modern hipster’s essentials are coffee, technological adaptation, and a rejection of trends.” Please help this question will give you 30 points Please help!!

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Rejecting trends, adapting to technological advancements, and consuming coffee are three of a modern hipster's essential traits.

When writing a conclusion, it is important to restate the thesis. The order of main points should be reversed so that the first point transitions into the last one stated. By reminding the reader of all the main points made in the essay and then finishing the sentence with the overall topic, it brings the essay review full circle. The thesis listed the traits as all nouns, while this changes them to actions. This also provides a little change to the original thesis.

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