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What’s wrong with these three statements?

Upon entering the community, a prolific garden caught my attention.

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This sleek and durable multitool includes a bottle opener, screw driver, ruler, standard blade, and serrated blade.

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With the first statement there is no need for a comma. With statement 2 too many and's are in the statement remove the first replace it with a comma. Do the same for statement 3

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