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Can someone please check my paper? I am really bad at English.

Can someone please check my paper? I am really bad at English.-example-1

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Her name is Anne Frank not Annie Frank

she wrote in it for two years about her life...

She tells us in the diary

I have an even greater need to get all kinds of things off my chest"

This was very important to her because of the time she was living in.

She also described her struggles and her mother. Calling her cold and says that there is nothing motherly about her.

and hated some people too.

and didn't enjoy her life in hiding and that she had no privacy

picked fights

she understood why they need to live in hiding

She realizes that she still needs to study

If you can send me the rest of the paper I can check it to if you'd like.

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