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How would I use temporal transition to revise the following paragraph?​

How would I use temporal transition to revise the following paragraph?​-example-1

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Just use transition words
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The answer is:

Yesterday evening, Darius went to the store because he wanted food. At that moment he met his teacher there, so they talked briefly about his latest project. Eventually, he decided to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Transitions refer to words and phrases that provide cohesion, which means they indicate how ideas relate within a text and take the reader from section to section. Temporal transitions signal:

frequency: always, now and then

duration: for along time, during

time: at the moment, yesterday

processes of time: at first, meanwhile, finally

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